dimanche 25 octobre 2009

My first presentation

Here is a link to my presentation.
Being recorded is really really frightening. Stressful. I don't like to hear my voice. But well ... If it can help me to improve myself ... I'll do it !

Well I found a lot of things to say about my presentation ...

First I got confused, I said that I was born in Paris twice.
I think that "I already was in the university of Marne la Vallée..." isn't correct, I'm not sure. "I already was a student in this university" may be a better way to say the same thing.
Instead of "Licence of Informatics" I should have said "Licence of IT"

"I like drawing, cinema ..." -> going to the cinema

"I play little of guitar" is not correct, ahem. "I play guitar a little" is better.

"I learned it" I didn't pronounce the -ed in learned ...

"I like travel" -> I like to travel

"I've gone to ..." -> "I went to" is better

Well well, if your ears are still alright, you can now listen to something more pleasant. Good night !

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