Presentation number 4 ! Really ?!
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"I tried to enter the Imac school, and I've succeed." -> I didn't pronounced "I've succeed" very well ... and the right formulation is "I've succeeded" I think.
"there are some things that you can't do in reality" -> I said some things too fast, it's really ugly, in fact, it seems that I said "something" and I added a "s" in the end. Maybe I should try with "there are a lot of things that you can't do ..."
Well, this is a better recording than in the beginning ! :D
Thanks for listening, have a good day. Don't forget to comment eh ? :D
jeudi 12 novembre 2009
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I noticed the same mistakes as you. Though I think you should, as most French people, to focus on word stress to give more rhythm to your voice.
RépondreSupprimerhello phanymac!
RépondreSupprimerbe careful of the pronounciation of "I studied"
I don't know if we can say "i would like to work in internet" it seems strange maybe you should say "to work in web area"
see you stephanie!
miaou!
It's to correct my own mistakes!
RépondreSupprimer"be careful about the pronunciation"
OUPS!
hi =)
RépondreSupprimerGood recording ! I think maybe you should improve your pronunciation, more especially word stress.
Hi,
RépondreSupprimerSorry to be late...
So these are things I notified :
- I understand "I have found there...." is that really what you said ? Because I think that you should easier say "I found..."
- "I try to enter..." maybe "I tried to join..."
- "if I start to read detective fictions" be carefull to pronounce the "s"
Good job anyway..
Bye
Hey ! :o
RépondreSupprimerI just realized I'd never heard you speak English before. Is it weird if I say that you speak exactly like Jo ? :D
Okay here are some little mistakes I noticed, aside from what others might have already pointed out :
"...in the university..." -> "at the university"
"I tried to enter" -> "I tried to get in/join"
"I went to a lot of capitals" -> "I've visited many capitals"
"some things you can't do in reality", saying "some things you can't do on paper" sounds better, in my opinion.
Overall, it was good ! Your English pronunciation is good, as @sebastienpoyer said, try working on word stress :)